Luke Hampton's Final To-Do List

Primary Genre: Realistic fiction

Word Count: 52,000

Description and Details:

When Luke Hampton died in a car accident on his way to Junior Prom, he left a list of ten things unfinished. Twenty-five years later, Reese Holland is struggling through her senior year. She finds Luke in her bathroom one morning and he begs her for help with completing his final to-do list so he can move on. The two strike up an unlikely friendship, though Reese has no idea how to have a ghostly BFF. With just six weeks before the anniversary of his death, only time will tell if they’ll be able to cross off Luke’s final tasks, allowing him to cross over, or if he’ll be stuck in the in-between forever.

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