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Get Beta Readers for Your WorkThis is chapter two after the first chapter: Greeted By The Ominosity. If you have decided to help me with this, THANK. YOU. SO MUCH🌼You would have no idea how much this means to me.
Heyo! I would like your honest feedback on this chapter of a very treasured book I'm creating. You are free to be brutally honest if you wish. Sugar coating won't make anyone better. So if you're willing to give this chapter a try, thank you so much!!!
Hi, I'm trying to write a dystopian kind of novel. I'm currently feeling jumbled and unsure. I really like how the book is in the end but I've been struggling with writing the start, I only have a few chapters in right now and just wanted to throw it out...
Hi, I'm trying to write a dystopian kind of novel. I'm currently feeling jumbled and unsure. I really like how the book is in the end but I've been struggling with writing the start, I only have a few chapters in right now and just wanted to throw it out there for anyone to read. Please give me some amazing suggestions and routes. I really am struggling with getting this in the same tone as the beginning chapters (1.2) and making it grow. Also I know my grammar is bad, just in the very beginning stages.
Im having issues with maybe introducing characters, and also feel its to short. I have planned out the middle to end and like the direction but will keep it updated as i go.
Murphy is an astronaut who spent billions of years in isolation after all people on Earth died to a plague. They recollect their identity by retelling their stories with Hal and with the people they loved.
introduction to two of the secondary characters of the book. Levi and Rafiwa in a train accident that turn out to be a twist in fate.
The first eight chapter of the book.
It follows the main protagonist Anok, in her journey to recruit clansmen, whom she previously scouted as potential candidates, in their endevours to uncover the truth of the world they live in which has been insued in war, division and poverty. each aspects...
The first eight chapter of the book.
It follows the main protagonist Anok, in her journey to recruit clansmen, whom she previously scouted as potential candidates, in their endevours to uncover the truth of the world they live in which has been insued in war, division and poverty. each aspects that the main five characters have personally suffered from and want to escape thus attaining freedom.
Second of three parts of Book 2 of The Rise of Arkillon's Phoenix Trilogy. Check out the first book (The Rise of Arkillon's Phoenix: Legacy) on Amazon, Kobo, BN, etc. if you are interested.
Book 2 Summary:
Namesiwa gave everything to ensure the ruins of Avaleur would survive. No. He...
Second of three parts of Book 2 of The Rise of Arkillon's Phoenix Trilogy. Check out the first book (The Rise of Arkillon's Phoenix: Legacy) on Amazon, Kobo, BN, etc. if you are interested.
Book 2 Summary:
Namesiwa gave everything to ensure the ruins of Avaleur would survive. No. He gave everything to ensure the survival of the Avaleurian people. The legacy he left behind now rests in the hands of a new Sage and those who will stand with her.
Syen and Roland, Sage and knight, hold first to the hope Namesiwa showed them. But grips can loosen with uncertainty and doubt. Friends have become enemies. Sons and brothers have become monsters. Is there a balance between justice and forgiveness? Can true unity be attainted? These questions, they must learn to answer while the werewolves and the shadows of Arkillon pry with rising hunger. If they don’t, Avaleur, and themselves, will be torn apart.
Book 2 Part 2 Desired Feedback:
1 Did the story hold your interest?
2 Could you relate to the main character(s)?
3 Interesting setting?
4 Discrepancies or inconsistencies?
5 Any parts that confused, frustrated, or annoyed you?
6 Did the story lag at any point?
7 Was there ever too much exposition?
8 Other comments?
I want a quick review of whether the story is compelling to readers and will make for an interesting read.
FIrst of three parts of Book 2 of The Rise of Arkillon's Phoenix Trilogy. Check out the first book (The Rise of Arkillon's Phoenix: Legacy) on Amazon, Kobo, BN, etc. if you are interested.
Book 2 Summary:
Namesiwa gave everything to ensure the ruins of Avaleur would survive. No. He...
FIrst of three parts of Book 2 of The Rise of Arkillon's Phoenix Trilogy. Check out the first book (The Rise of Arkillon's Phoenix: Legacy) on Amazon, Kobo, BN, etc. if you are interested.
Book 2 Summary:
Namesiwa gave everything to ensure the ruins of Avaleur would survive. No. He gave everything to ensure the survival of the Avaleurian people. The legacy he left behind now rests in the hands of a new Sage and those who will stand with her.
Syen and Roland, Sage and knight, hold first to the hope Namesiwa showed them. But grips can loosen with uncertainty and doubt. Friends have become enemies. Sons and brothers have become monsters. Is there a balance between justice and forgiveness? Can true unity be attainted? These questions, they must learn to answer while the werewolves and the shadows of Arkillon pry with rising hunger. If they don’t, Avaleur, and themselves, will be torn apart.
Book 2 Part 1 Desired Feedback:
1 Did the story hold your interest?
2 Could you relate to the main character(s)?
3 Interesting setting?
4 Discrepancies or inconsistencies?
5 Any parts that confused, frustrated, or annoyed you?
6 Did the story lag at any point?
7 Was there ever too much exposition?
8 Other comments?
I would love any type of criticism, praise, notes, critiques, etc. I would love to know which characters you like, which lines you like, and which you don't, and which your not sure of. Tell me if you think I should cut a part out, etc.